Allergy List

We all received this info in an email, but I thought I would also post it here for reference.  That way it's easy to return to if we have questions.

Also, we have all been working around Karen's allergies quite deliciously so far, but since most of us aren't used to doing so I thought I might ask Karen to provide a few favorite recipe ideas at some point?  I am determined to bake something eventually.  Are there any gluten-free, nut-free, vegan cookie/muffin recipes out there?

Karen says:

As you know I am very allergic - EpiPen level, kryptonite- could result in death- type allergic. I also have celiac disease. Let me underline that it's fully possible to work around this and that it very rarely goes wrong, but it requires I pester you guys with the following alarming information:

There are three layers to this –

1. The stuff I can't be in the room with - this goes for peanuts and loose nuts (and large amounts of very stinky cheeses.) It's to do with the dust and smells that spread in the air and can give me an asthma attack. Also, the dust from loose nuts on people's hands gets everywhere and means I'm likely to have a non-mortal but very unpleasant allergic reaction from touching surfaces like doorknobs etc that the nut eaters have touched or from giving one a hug at the end of the night. 

 2. The second layer is that I can’t be in a room/small apartment where some allergens have been recently heated or cooked. This goes for eggs, nuts and dairy (i.e. scrambled eggs, steamed or boiling milk, the baking of delicious egg-milk-nut-cake.) If there is ventilation, doors to keep closed to the cooking area and/or a few hours between me and the cooking, it's fine. 

3. The third layer is what I personally can't eat, list follows:

Allergies: 

All milk products (milk protein, so that includes lactose free products)

Eggs

All nuts, including almonds, pine nuts, and particularly peanuts

Soy

Sesame seeds

Gluten (all kinds of flour and grain except corn, potato, rice, quinoa, and special gluten free oats.)

Turkey 

Flavor enhancers (msg)

Strawberries

Honey

Raw core fruits such as cherries, nectarines, peaches, apples and pears.

(other fruit like banana, oranges and grapes are fine)

Typical dangerous ingredient listings include "spices", "Natural flavor", "seasonings", casein, malt vinegar etc. I also avoid "may contain traces of:" nuts, peanuts, eggs and dairy.

Spice mixes, sauces and mustards etc without a detailed ingredient list can contain allergens.

As tiny and invisible amounts are enough to trigger allergic reactions:  hands,  knives, pan and cutting boards have to be thoroughly washed if they've touched any allergens.

For frying etc coconut, olive, rape seed, corn or sunflower oil are fine.

All pure spices and herbs are fine, all vegetables are fine, also fish and meat (except turkey), potatoes, coconut and rice are fine. :-)

This means I can eat salads with only vegetables in them and many other delicious things. It does mean however, that it can be challenging to cook for me. Which is why you always see me with lunch boxes and I usually eat what I bring myself. I will absolutely not hold it against anyone if they don't feel up to cooking for me. Don't worry about it.

It means as long as you don't cook the eggs/cakes/etc in the venue right before the meeting, you guys can eat anything except loose nuts and very stinky cheeses as long as you wash your hands at some point during the night (not usually a problem) and hug me a little carefully.

Thanks for reading this and please don’t hesitate for a second to call or email with any questions! 

Karen 

347.603.2053. karenhavelin@gmail.com

Madeline's Author Comments on Saint Sebastian

So I think you guys can mostly intuit what I'm looking for in terms of feedback.  I'm looking to start sending this out soonish and want to know how it reads as a whole, whether the beginning (which I have heavily edited) flows smoothly and whether the ending fits and feels complete (or not).  I've also received the comment that the writing isn't direct/lewd enough for fourteen year old boys.  I'm not sure what to do about this since lewd wasn't at all what I was going for in terms of tone, but I'm interested to hear your opinions.

I would love line edits (which I understand is easier for those people with actual copies than it is for those without), but if you're not feeling it I understand.

Thanks! xoxo

Karen's Author Comments

Dear workshop,

Several of you have read some of these stories in slightly different incarnations. In general I need to know how this works as a whole novel-like thing, and as one and the same main character.

Also, of course how they work as discrete stories, but they’ve all been workshopped before separately. Line notes are welcome if you feel up to it, or you could just make small notes of what you’re thinking at different times, if you miss certain information at specific times or start to fade, etc. Or refrain if you prefer.

Organizing principles, whether they work and suggestions for better solutions.

Unified themes, are they there or do they need to be strengthened? The titles are new, what do you think?

My goal is that they should work as separate stories and have some variation in style and mood between them (also want your thoughts on this) but that they should deepen each other, resonate and layer in a meaningful way, particularly when read in the right order.

The first story in particular is a work in progress and contains elements I’m not sure about, but I really really hope this reads like the main chunks of a very novel-like unified collection.

Thanks for reading, can’t wait to hear what you think!

           

Scott Dievendorf's Author Comments

For the first 70 pages of Time As Weather (working title).

Feel free to treat it as you please. 

Since this is such a new project, I don't necessarily have a complete handle on it. I don't have it totally planned (though the ending is written and many major points are accounted for in notes). 

My main concern is if it's working, interesting, worth continuing, or even plausible (as a novel, not the premise). 

Don't worry about line edits, since this is a nascent stage of the book.

I would like feedback on sections—chapter by chapter—as well as the whole, particularly what's not working, what's plain foolish, or what's inconsistent. Basic workshop stuff.