So I think you guys can mostly intuit what I'm looking for in terms of feedback. I'm looking to start sending this out soonish and want to know how it reads as a whole, whether the beginning (which I have heavily edited) flows smoothly and whether the ending fits and feels complete (or not). I've also received the comment that the writing isn't direct/lewd enough for fourteen year old boys. I'm not sure what to do about this since lewd wasn't at all what I was going for in terms of tone, but I'm interested to hear your opinions.
I would love line edits (which I understand is easier for those people with actual copies than it is for those without), but if you're not feeling it I understand.
Thanks! xoxo
I would love line edits (which I understand is easier for those people with actual copies than it is for those without), but if you're not feeling it I understand.
Thanks! xoxo
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